Hi Emily It's Bessie I really like your poem. you have put lots of effort in. Maybe next time you could come up with another word to go with present like "Mysterious Presents" But otherwise I think you have done a great job. bye
This is a really great description of Christmas eve and morning. It is an exciting feeling waking up on Christmas day and running to see what is under the tree. I remember that feel from when I was a kid! Well done and keep up the great work! I look forward to reading more of your work while you are learning from home.
Hi Emily
ReplyDeleteIt's Bessie I really like your poem. you have put lots of effort in. Maybe next time you could come up with another word to go with present like "Mysterious Presents"
But otherwise I think you have done a great job.
bye
Hi Emily
ReplyDeleteHope all is good with you at home in your bubble!
This is a really great description of Christmas eve and morning. It is an exciting feeling waking up on Christmas day and running to see what is under the tree. I remember that feel from when I was a kid!
Well done and keep up the great work! I look forward to reading more of your work while you are learning from home.
Until next time
Mrs Costello :)