Showing posts with label 2019. Show all posts
Showing posts with label 2019. Show all posts
Thursday, November 7, 2019
Wednesday, August 28, 2019
managing self
Emily’s Managing self goals
I am currently working at multistructural.To become Relational.I need to get to bring stationery and headphones to school. to do this i will have to get dome new stationary and headphones and bring them to school.
Friday, July 26, 2019
Friday, June 21, 2019
Emilys persausive writing
Littering Persuasive writing
WALT: Write a persuasive piece to convince an audience.
I believe that people will one day should stop littering hopefully. My first reason is that the sea creatures are dying because there trying to eat litter.My second reason is that birds try to eat the rubbish.My third reason is that it’s bad for the environment because it doesn't look nice. Would you litter I wouldn't By Emily Persuasive Writing Success Criteria Introduction Opening question Opinion/Reason 3 Reasons Each paragraph is one idea supported with your reasons/facts Conclusion This ties back/recaps back to the introduction Highlight evidence of linking words. I like how you have added on to your simple reason to make them bigger and more interesting.
I think you can work on adding more linking words next time and adding more personal opinion supported by facts. Bessie.
yes i know i forgot about my linking words.
WALT: Write a persuasive piece to convince an audience.
I believe that people will one day should stop littering hopefully. My first reason is that the sea creatures are dying because there trying to eat litter.My second reason is that birds try to eat the rubbish.My third reason is that it’s bad for the environment because it doesn't look nice. Would you litter I wouldn't By Emily Persuasive Writing Success Criteria Introduction Opening question Opinion/Reason 3 Reasons Each paragraph is one idea supported with your reasons/facts Conclusion This ties back/recaps back to the introduction Highlight evidence of linking words. I like how you have added on to your simple reason to make them bigger and more interesting.
I think you can work on adding more linking words next time and adding more personal opinion supported by facts. Bessie.
yes i know i forgot about my linking words.
Wednesday, April 3, 2019
Current Events
The purpose of this activity was to use the 6 thinking hats to look closely at at an article. I liked doing this actgivity because it was interesting.
Monday, March 18, 2019
Goal setting
We had to analyse our testing data and come up with some goals that we would like to work on. Here are my new ones.
Thursday, February 28, 2019
westport camp 2019
Hello I am so happy that you are or will or might read my slide it is about camp I really hope you engoy my slide about camp I have worked so hard on it so I hope you engoy.
Wednesday, February 20, 2019
Friday, February 8, 2019
welcome to my blog
Hello my name is Emily and I am 9 years old and welcome to my blog. My favourite subject is reading. My favourite food is apple and pineapple, my favourite thing we've done so far is making the time capsules. My favourite thing at home is spending time with my bunny Oscar.`
I look froward to blogging with you!
I look froward to blogging with you!
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