Emilys persausive writing

Littering Persuasive writing
WALT: Write a persuasive piece to convince an audience.

 I believe that people will one day should stop littering hopefully. My first reason is that the sea creatures are dying because there trying to eat litter.My second reason is that birds try to eat the rubbish.My third reason is that it’s bad for the environment because it doesn't look nice. Would you litter I wouldn't By Emily Persuasive Writing Success Criteria Introduction Opening question Opinion/Reason 3 Reasons Each paragraph is one idea supported with your reasons/facts Conclusion This ties back/recaps back to the introduction Highlight evidence of linking words. I like how you have added on to your simple reason to make them bigger and more interesting.

 I think you can work on adding more linking words next time and adding more personal opinion supported by facts. Bessie.

yes i know i forgot about my linking words.

Emilys checker game

WALT: we are learning to make a digital board game.

power station hill

Current Events

The purpose of this activity was to use the 6 thinking hats to look closely at at an article.  I liked doing this actgivity because it was interesting.

Waiho bridge fell down

WALT: write a recount.

Waiho bridge falls down in franz joseph. At 5pm tuesday 26 of march 2019. Many roads were closed in the accident. It was like dominoes falling down.The police came down to shut the bridge it is to dangerous to go on it now.I bet the builders are fixing it now.Some parts of Westland face up to 800 millimetres of rain.The weather was really strong that the bridge fell.It is a very old bridge so no wonder it fell down in to the river.The storm was extremely strong and windy it would of blew branches off trees.

By Emily M

It was writing a recount about the waiho bridge falling down in the storm.

Goal setting

We had to analyse our testing data and come up with some goals that we would like to work on.  Here are my new ones.

Poetry Anthology

We have been learning about
mines afire
the hardest poem
the Rap
the Easiest to best poem
acrostic poem