Tuesday, September 17, 2019
This 4 weeks i am doing prep i am in the group painting maniacs we are painting beetle clickers witch are jar lids that click we are also painting rocks and jars. My positive is that we are making lots of stuff and they are really good my negative is that we are getting paint every where but it's really fun.
Friday, August 30, 2019
Wednesday, August 28, 2019
managing self
Emily’s Managing self goals
I am currently working at multistructural.To become Relational.I need to get to bring stationery and headphones to school. to do this i will have to get dome new stationary and headphones and bring them to school.
Friday, July 26, 2019
Friday, June 21, 2019
Emilys persausive writing
Littering Persuasive writing
WALT: Write a persuasive piece to convince an audience.
I believe that people will one day should stop littering hopefully. My first reason is that the sea creatures are dying because there trying to eat litter.My second reason is that birds try to eat the rubbish.My third reason is that it’s bad for the environment because it doesn't look nice. Would you litter I wouldn't By Emily Persuasive Writing Success Criteria Introduction Opening question Opinion/Reason 3 Reasons Each paragraph is one idea supported with your reasons/facts Conclusion This ties back/recaps back to the introduction Highlight evidence of linking words. I like how you have added on to your simple reason to make them bigger and more interesting.
I think you can work on adding more linking words next time and adding more personal opinion supported by facts. Bessie.
yes i know i forgot about my linking words.
WALT: Write a persuasive piece to convince an audience.
I believe that people will one day should stop littering hopefully. My first reason is that the sea creatures are dying because there trying to eat litter.My second reason is that birds try to eat the rubbish.My third reason is that it’s bad for the environment because it doesn't look nice. Would you litter I wouldn't By Emily Persuasive Writing Success Criteria Introduction Opening question Opinion/Reason 3 Reasons Each paragraph is one idea supported with your reasons/facts Conclusion This ties back/recaps back to the introduction Highlight evidence of linking words. I like how you have added on to your simple reason to make them bigger and more interesting.
I think you can work on adding more linking words next time and adding more personal opinion supported by facts. Bessie.
yes i know i forgot about my linking words.
Wednesday, May 22, 2019
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